Friday, 20 February 2015

Chicken worms

Walt: write a detailed introduction with a hook and orientation.

Have you ever fed anyone chicken flavored worms?  As we ate the chicken worms it was silly, yummy and it was like we were baby chicks. I did not expect to eat thick juicy chicken flavored worms today.

Mr Goodwin, my class and I had a taste of chicken flavored worms. It was slimy and yummy.
I have written 3 sentences about it and also I have a question for all. I have been working and trying my best to attract the audience or hook them in to read my intro. My class and I have all written a intro. Read my story and see how it all goes down.

Moroni had checked the rubric of how I did.

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