shower at the pool's ?

When we hopped in the shower,we washed off the shampoo and dirt off our bodies. It was so cold we were shivering and shaking. The shower felt like someone was tickling and massaging.

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White bait life cycle.

swimming

Takapu

Swimming

We are lucky to have professional

coaches teaching us in our swimming lessons, so i made the most of it and worked really hard to improve my technique.

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we hopped in the shower,we washed off the shampoo and dirt off our bodies. It was so cold we were shivering and shaking. The shower felt like someone was tickling and massaging.

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What do you know about relay races?When we did our relay races we were exhausted. We only did this on our final day of swimming.

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Thanks Mr Burt for paying for professional coaches to teach us.

Robots path

Monarch emergency

Monarch blog post

In our class we use to have a monarch caterpillar that was going to turn into a chrysalis and hatch into a monarch butterfly. If the chrysalis falls off the swan plant then that means it is going to die.Luckily the monarch butterfly that we had did not die and it hatched alright.

What makes an Effective paragraph ?

In my group i have been thinking about what i need to do to write an effective  paragraph.

Here is the rubric I'm going to use to reflect on my writing.

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