Year 5/6 camp last year

Walt: make connections across a wide range of text.


I visited Collin's blog about the year 5 and 6 camp. Collin had a heap of fun and was excited and he had fun cooking with Ms Tito and the others. He even thought that cooking the batch was funny because you would have to jump back so the oil does not burn you.



The camp sounds like a heap of fun cannot wait until camp.
 The cooking sounds cool but also funny.
 What a interesting camp that we will be having tomorrow until Friday.

This shout out is to Collin he has said some things about the year 5/6 camp when he was in year 6. I am nervous of what kind of things we will be doing at camp tomorrow. Thank you.

Our task was make a connection with a wide range of text and to look on some of the year 6 witch are now year 7's. We had to look for a piece of writing about them writing about the camp at Pt England school. We have to write 2 paragraphs and a shout out to the person that you looked at.

River talks (Omaru creek)

Walt: write a detailed introduction with a hook and orientation.

The polluted paru Omaru creek.

All of class 6, 7 and 8 went down to Omaru for about an hour and a half to watch the river talks demonstration, and to discuss how to look after our community.

What could you do to look after Omaru creek?

Mubashshir had marked my rubric.

We are learning to write a detailed introduction. Class 7 are writing a simple sentence a complex sentence and then a simple question. This is all about Omaru creek and how to keep it nice and clean. Learning about this is important to our community.