River talks (Omaru creek)

Walt: write a detailed introduction with a hook and orientation.

The polluted paru Omaru creek.

All of class 6, 7 and 8 went down to Omaru for about an hour and a half to watch the river talks demonstration, and to discuss how to look after our community.

What could you do to look after Omaru creek?

Mubashshir had marked my rubric.

We are learning to write a detailed introduction. Class 7 are writing a simple sentence a complex sentence and then a simple question. This is all about Omaru creek and how to keep it nice and clean. Learning about this is important to our community.