Swimming

We are lucky to have professional

coaches teaching us in our swimming lessons, so i made the most of it and worked really hard to improve my technique.

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we hopped in the shower,we washed off the shampoo and dirt off our bodies. It was so cold we were shivering and shaking. The shower felt like someone was tickling and massaging.

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What do you know about relay races?When we did our relay races we were exhausted. We only did this on our final day of swimming.

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Thanks Mr Burt for paying for professional coaches to teach us.